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The chart below shows the percentage of people using four different types of transportation in a European city between 1990 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart below shows the percentage of people using four different types of transportation in a European city between 1990 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart
show
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 four transport
people
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use
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used
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 in one European city from 1990 to 2020. The transport
are
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is
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car
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,
bus
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,
bike
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 and
train
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. In 1990, the most used was
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bus
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a bus
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. Many
people
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 take the
bus
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.
Car
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 was second.
Bike
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 and
train
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 not very popular. In 2000,
car
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 go up.
Bus
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 go down.
Train
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 same.
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Bike
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The bike
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Linking Words
also
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is also
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same
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the same
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. In 2010,
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car
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cars
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 still go up and more
people
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 use it.
Bus
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 go more down.
Train
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go
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goes
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 a little up.
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Bike
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The bike
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 is
same
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the same
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. In 2020,
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car
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the car
a car
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 is
most
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the most
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 used.
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Bus
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The bus
A bus
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 is low.
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Train
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The train
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 is a bit more.
Bike
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still
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is still
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 not much. In summary,
people
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 use
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car
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cars
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 more now.
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Bus
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The bus
A bus
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 is used less.
Train
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 little change.
Bike
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 is always low.

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Linking words: Add more linking words.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, car, bus, bike, train with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "go up" was used 3 times.
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