You have recently moved to a new city for work. Write a letter to a friend about your move. In your letter: describe the new city and your job explain why you moved invite your friend to visit
Dear Jack,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing to tell you the great news that I moved to
Riyadh
, The capital of Saudi Arabia Because Use synonyms
for
my new job is Change preposition
apply
financial
analyst. Add an article
a financial
This
is my fifth day here and Linking Words
Riyadh
is a fantastic city with great places Use synonyms
such
asLinking Words
:
boulevard world, Kingdom Arena, and Golden Stadium. As a financial analyst, I always have been interested in numbers, analysis, and ratios. Now I feel it's a dream because Remove the comma
apply
this
job is great. First of all.
I moved here because Linking Words
Riyadh
is a brilliant city, Use synonyms
Linking Words
also
I have an offer for my dream job. These reasons are more than enough to bring me here in Correct word choice
and also
Riyadh
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, we have here a lot of good places to enjoy with it like the black stamp.
I would love to see you here in Linking Words
capital
of Saudi Arabia to enjoy with us. Add an article
the capital
Also
, Sami, Rami, and Yousef will come to my new home. So I really want you to come with all of us to enjoy at my home. After that, we will go hang out and we will go to a lot of great places together.
Now everything is clear and I would love to see everything go as planned. You all are welcome to visit Linking Words
Riyadh
and have fun guys. See you soon.
Best wishes, AzzamUse synonyms
azzam.alammari1
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task achievement
Add a more clear introduction to explain the purpose of the letter.
coherence and cohesion
Use linking words to connect ideas better between sentences.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure each paragraph focuses on one main idea.
positive
Your enthusiasm about your new job is very clear.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite