You are organizing a conference for your company. Write a letter to a colleague asking him/her to give a presentation during the conference. -Describe what this conference is about -Why you want him/her to give a presentation -Give details about the conference

Dear Mr Sim, Hope you are doing great. I am writing
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letter to ask your permission if you can participate in
upcoming
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the upcoming
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conference and it is going to be held in your company's main hall organized by myself. As you know, our company
host
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hosts
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conferences every year.
This
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year it is going to be held on 17th June and Health care will be the main topic for the event. We have chosen
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topic because
health
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the health
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care system is widely spreading across all over the world. Our company wants to be a part of the AC hospital.
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this
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event
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this
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apply
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will be the first step towards
new
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a new
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journey. I
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really appreciate
if
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it if
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you
will
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consider my proposal to present the Ophthalmology project in the present. I remember
youbhave
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you have
told me that you worked as an Ophthalmic technician in past.
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, it presentation will be very easy for you to finish in
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period of time.
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this
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,
Conference
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the Conference
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is going to take place
on
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in
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the main hall. More than 50
peopel
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people
are invited
for
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to
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the meeting. It's going to be held for three to four hours.
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, our manager has invited the media to publish
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news
on
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in
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newspaper
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the newspaper
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. So,
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is a good chance to show your skills. I look forward to your prompt reply. Yours Faithfully, Saijbir.

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task achievement
Make sure to say who is invited to the conference and why it matters.
coherence and cohesion
Try to use clear topic sentences for each paragraph to show the main idea.
coherence and cohesion
Double-check spelling and grammar to avoid small mistakes.
positive
The letter has a friendly tone, which is suitable for a colleague.
positive
You provided good reasons for your colleague's participation, like their past experience.
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