You are organizing a conference for your company. Write a letter to a colleague asking him/her to give a presentation during the conference. -Describe what this conference is about -Why you want him/her to give a presentation -Give details about the conference

Dear Mr Sim, Hope you are doing great. I am writing

this

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letter to ask your permission if you can participate in

upcoming

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the upcoming

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conference and it is going to be held in your company's main hall organized by myself. As you know, our company

host

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hosts

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conferences every year.

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year it is going to be held on 17th June and Health care will be the main topic for the event. We have chosen

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topic because

health

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the health

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care system is widely spreading across all over the world. Our company wants to be a part of the AC hospital.

By helding

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Helding

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this

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event

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this

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apply

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will be the first step towards

new

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a new

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journey. I

will

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would

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really appreciate

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it if

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you

will

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would

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consider my proposal to present the Ophthalmology project in the present. I remember

youbhave

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you have

told me that you worked as an Ophthalmic technician in past.

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, it presentation will be very easy for you to finish in

short

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a short

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period of time.

Apart from

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this

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Conference

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the Conference

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is going to take place

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the main hall. More than 50

peopel

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people

are invited

for

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the meeting. It's going to be held for three to four hours.

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, our manager has invited the media to publish

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news

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newspaper

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the newspaper

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. So,

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is a good chance to show your skills. I look forward to your prompt reply. Yours Faithfully, Saijbir.

kaursaijbirFri May 30 2025

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task achievement

Make sure to say who is invited to the conference and why it matters.

coherence and cohesion

Try to use clear topic sentences for each paragraph to show the main idea.

coherence and cohesion

Double-check spelling and grammar to avoid small mistakes.

positive

The letter has a friendly tone, which is suitable for a colleague.

positive

You provided good reasons for your colleague's participation, like their past experience.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

224 words

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