Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and town, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

Have you ever wondered why farmland is mostly populated with seniors? Young folk are exsiting the countryside to experience life in

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cities and towns,

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compared

to the historic old sites they previously grew up in .

Youngesters

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Youngsters

crave the endless doors

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cities and highly populated towns provide. In

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will be tackling the negative impacts

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is causing and how we as members of a

community

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can counter

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issue. A great deal of problems arise

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for

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the aged

indiviuals

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individuals

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stationed

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the

country side

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due to

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lack of care. For

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communities with a low rate of young

indiviuals

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individuals

will dramatically decrease the services that elderly souls require; from constant medical supervision,

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home aid,

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geniune

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genuine

relationships that the new age can learn from to learn better from the mistakes of the past to better develop their chances of

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success

. If old people are

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bonded

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history and great stories are buried tarnishing

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of a

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society

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why great research should be developed to reduce the negative impacts significantly. In order to compact

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conflict the countryside must be developed to suit the

requirments

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requirements

of the new generation.

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facilties

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facilities

that youngsters are reaching for must be made possible

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as advanced

lawfirms

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law firms

, technologically advanced hospitals, activity centers and much more.

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what young stars are looking for can be achieved by making their voices heard

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bringing to life their dreams and hopes. Through urbanizing and

reconstructioning

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reconstructing

reconstruction

the

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no one will have the need to find their

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ambitions

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. Simply put, to counter the issue of the emigration of the youth developing areas is essential. To ensure there is a large enough population for the

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to work

togather

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together

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sincerly

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sincerely

believe that a

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can only build on each other and if a piece is missing

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all will be

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Use clear topic sentences for each paragraph to show your main idea.

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Make sure to develop your ideas more fully with examples or explanations.

coherence and cohesion

Check for spelling errors, for example, 'exsiting' should be 'existing' and 'comprehneding' should be 'comprehending'.

task achievement

You introduce the topic well and state your intention to discuss the issues.

coherence and cohesion

You have a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

314 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

rural exodus
workforce decline
social services
cultural erosion
economic stagnation
depopulation
infrastructure burden
generational gap
policy interventions
economic diversification
rural infrastructure
community-based projects
mobile healthcare
communal ties
incentive schemes
urban influx
village abandonment

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Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and town, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some working parents think that childcare centers provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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some people say that all people should stay in full-time education until they are at least 18 years old. to what do you extent do you agree or disagree?