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The map below shows the town of Sanditon Beach before and after an airport was built. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the town of Sanditon Beach before and after an airport was built. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the locations of different amenities in the southwest airport and the expected changes in the infrastructure in the city of Sanditon Beach.
Overall
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, significant
devlopment
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development
 includes
increase
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an increase
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 in the number of gates and
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the availablity
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availablity
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availability
 of transport facilities to enhance convenience for customers. Currently, there are eight entrances and exits, three of which are easily accessible by
pedestrains
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pedestrians
.
However
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, in
future
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future,
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 the number of gates will be doubled with
replacement
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the replacement
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 of
walkaway
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walkaways
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 with sky
train
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trains
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.
Furthermore
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, in the east of the layout, the proposed changes involve the establishment of ATM machines,
cafe
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a cafe
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 and
care
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a care
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 hire area on the land which is vacant currently near the entrance for arrivals.
Additionally
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, the locations of
cafe
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the cafe
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 and
check in
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check-in
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has
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have
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 been swapped simultaneously, resulting in
opening
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the opening
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 of
cafe
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a cafe
the cafe
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 near the bag drop area close to the way of departure doors.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • town
  • airport
  • built
  • beach
  • houses
  • shops
  • facilities
  • expanded
  • tourism
  • construction
  • roads
  • access
  • travelers
  • population
  • developed
  • job opportunities
  • residential area
  • quiet
  • bustling
  • visitors
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