The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The rendered maps delineate the comparison
about
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the changes seen in a bookstore .During the given time period of 2000 and
present
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the present
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. The striking feature of the maps is that a lot of modifications have been witnessed in a bookshop . Surprisingly , in the
north west
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northwest
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corner, Art , hobbies ,
cookery
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and cookery
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rooms have been added in
fiction
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the fiction
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area by demolishing from the centre of the store and sitting tables have been
introduce
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introducing
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there. By probing
further
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, it is evident that ,
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fiction room which was located in the
north east
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northeast
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corner of the store
have
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has
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been
exchange
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exchanging
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into non-fiction .It is
also
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observed that
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the traval
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traval
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travel
area
have been remaining
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has remained
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at the same place.
traval
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travel
area , new books and service desk have been remaining same. It is
also
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observed that
,
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apply
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the cafe
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cafe
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cafes
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have been
new
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newly
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built by removing the non-fiction room . From
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overall
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the overall
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analysis , it can be extrapolated that drastic transformations have been witnessed in a bookstore during the given time period.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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