The chart below shows the number of three types of visitor to a museum between 1997 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of three types of visitor to a museum between 1997 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the number of three types of visitor to a museum between 1997 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart above illustrates the
number
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of
museum
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visitors
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in three categories—adults, children under 15, and attendees of special exhibitions—between 1997 and 2012.The units are measured in numbers.
Overall
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, adult
visitors
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visited a
museum
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the most throughout the period,
while
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special exhibition
visitors
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were the lowest.
Moreover
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, people visited a
museum
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the most in 2007. The
number
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of adult
visitors
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was 300,100 in 1997. The figure remained relatively stable
then
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rose significantly to reach its peak at 400,500 in 2007, before falling to 380,000 in the final year. Regarding the
number
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of special exhibition
visitors
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, the
number
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was around 28,000 in 1997 and increased gradually to 42,000 in 2012.
However
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, the
number
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of
visitors
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aged under 15 was 120,000 in 1997 and decreased constantly to 82,300 in 2012. In terms of the
overall
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number
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of
visitors
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between 1997 and 2002, there were 448,100 people who visited a
museum
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in the first year
then
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fell slightly to 441,200 in 2002. In 2007, the
visitors
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number
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climbed considerably to 525,200 and declined marginally to 504,300 in 2012.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, museum, visitors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • number
  • visitor
  • museum
  • overall
  • peak
  • increase
  • low
  • adults
  • school groups
  • senior citizens
  • period
  • main audience
  • comparisons
  • features
  • suggesting
  • growth
  • programs
  • years
  • initial
  • showing
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