You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter • explaining the problems • suggesting ways to help the situation • proposing a possible meeting.

Dear Neighbours, I'm Shivani I'm living in Wing-C on

5th

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the 5th

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floor , am writing

this

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letter to notify

everyone

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am facing a problem of parking my

car

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from

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for

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past

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the past

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few months. The main problem is parking space,

Car

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parking is very essential for all the people who are living in

this

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Society. the number of

casr

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cases

is incerasing day by day because I'm noticing

majority

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the majority

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of the spots are full which

waste

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wastes

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lots of time to find

spot

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a spot

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near by my my

buliding

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building

compound .

Apart from

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this

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, I had

situation

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a situation

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when someone

park

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parked

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beside my

car

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and there

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was

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no way to go out because of

this

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reach

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reached

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my work late,

even

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and even

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apply

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got scolded

from

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my boss. These situations

needs

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need

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apply

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improvement. If

buliding

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building

management assigns

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apply

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perament

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permanent

Car

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parking spots to every

indiviua

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individual

living in

the

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apply

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society it will

evenetally

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eventually

finsih

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finish

both problems.

While

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society

make

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makes

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any

decison

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decision

, the

resdients

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residents

can bring their

suggestions`

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suggestions

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. We can arrange a meeting

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apply

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next weekend on June 10th, which will give

everyone

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time for

disscussion

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discussion

. I hope

everyone

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agree

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agrees

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with me and I'll wait for

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everyone

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everyone's

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response. Yours

Sincerly

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Sincerely

, Shivani.

shivanusharma09748Sat May 31 2025

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task response

Clarify the main issues with clearer examples and more details.

coherence and cohesion

Improve the flow by using linking words (e.g., 'however', 'also').

coherence and cohesion

Make sure to check for spelling mistakes and grammar errors.

coherence and cohesion

You have a clear greeting and closing which is good for a letter format.

task response

You have addressed a relevant issue that affects everyone in the parking area.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
34
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

191 words

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The Closing

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