The maps show how the industrial area will change into a housing area in the future Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show how the industrial area will change into a housing area in the future Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps show how the industrial area will change into a housing area in the future Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps demonstrate the proposed plan for converting a commercial location to
the
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residential area in
upcoming
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the upcoming
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years.
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, significant changes involve the construction of apartments, houses with varied numbers of bedrooms and amenities for convenient parking for residents. Currently, the industrial area is connected to the main road from all
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directions which will be similar to the development of homes for easy access. The main entrance for accessing companies is connected to the road in the north. On the west of the main gate , there are parking and storage facilities for employees and employers. In future,
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location will be utilised for building three and four-bedroom homes. In the north of the layout, the expected transformation includes replacing the entrance with two-bedroom houses. The owners of these houses can easily approach the communal garden which is on the back side of the homes. In future, two locations for parking will be developed, one in the south and the other in the northeast direction. The former will be more accessible to the residents with more than two bedrooms and the double bedroom occupiers and apartments which will be in the
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can easily access the latter.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • change
  • area
  • houses
  • future
  • industrial
  • housing
  • zone
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • green space
  • residential
  • community
  • parks
  • living spaces
  • families
  • quality of life
  • sustainable
  • road network
  • access
  • improved
  • structures
  • indicating
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