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Band 4.5

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .................,

Dear Sir my name is
tania
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Tania
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im
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I'm
 living in your rented accommodation, sorry for
disstrub
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disturbing
 you but
i
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I
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 want to tell you something about your furniture because your furniture
have
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has
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 been
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a long
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long
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long one
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.
i
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I
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cant
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can't
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 use
the
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apply
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furniture like
a
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apply
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your soffa because the smell of the
soffa
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sofa
so
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is so
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 stinky and the table
of
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in
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 my kitchen is very weak because
i
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I
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 found
the
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a
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 house of
bee
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 in
ther
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there
 its very
dangers
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dangerous
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 my family
cant
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can't
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 stay with that because we have a toddler very active to playing or run around there. we
scare
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are
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if
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scared if
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 the
bee
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bees
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 fly and bite our family.
i
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I
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 hope you can
understing
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understand
 that and you must change
this
Linking Words
soffa
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sofa
 or the table. and
im
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I'm
 sorry
for
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to
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 complaint you but
i
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I
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 must because
i
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I
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have
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had
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 no idea
to
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how to
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doing
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do
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 that before
i
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I
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tell
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told
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 you
firs
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first
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. if you
cant
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can't
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 change or move it because
your
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you're
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bussy
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busy
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,maybe
i
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I
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 can
to
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apply
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do that.

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to write in full sentences with correct punctuation.
coherence and cohesion
Clearly separate your ideas into different paragraphs. Each paragraph should focus on one main idea.
task achievement
Be polite and formal while writing to your landlord. Use appropriate greetings and closings.
task achievement
You explained the problems clearly, which is important for communication.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dear
  • I am writing to express my dissatisfaction
  • regarding
  • the condition
  • furniture
  • belongings
  • for instance
  • damaged
  • broken
  • worn-out
  • appliance
  • household items
  • it is unacceptable
  • inconvenient
  • inhabitable
  • affecting
  • negatively
  • urgent attention
  • replacement
  • repair
  • resolve
  • maintenance
  • prompt response
  • Thank you for your attention
  • Yours sincerely
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