You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .................,
Dear Sir
my name is
tania
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Tania
im
living in your rented accommodation, sorry for Correct your spelling
I'm
disstrub
you but Correct your spelling
disturbing
i
want to tell you something about your furniture because your furniture Change the capitalization
I
have
been Change the verb form
has
Correct article usage
a long
long
. Correct pronoun usage
long one
i
Change the capitalization
I
cant
use Correct your spelling
can't
the
furniture like Correct article usage
apply
a
your soffa because the smell of the Remove the article
apply
soffa
Correct your spelling
sofa
so
stinky and the table Add a missing verb
is so
of
my kitchen is very weak because Change preposition
in
i
found Change the capitalization
I
the
house of Correct article usage
a
bee
in Fix the agreement mistake
bees
ther
its very Correct your spelling
there
dangers
my family Replace the word
dangerous
cant
stay with that because we have a toddler very active to playing or run around there. we Correct your spelling
can't
scare
Verb problem
are
if
the Correct word choice
scared if
bee
fly and bite our family. Fix the agreement mistake
bees
i
hope you can Change the capitalization
I
understing
that and you must change Correct your spelling
understand
this
Linking Words
soffa
or the table. and Correct your spelling
sofa
im
sorry Correct your spelling
I'm
for
complaint you but Change preposition
to
i
must because Change the capitalization
I
i
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I
have
no idea Wrong verb form
had
to
Rephrase
how to
doing
that before Change the form of the verb
do
i
Change the capitalization
I
tell
you Wrong verb form
told
firs
. if you Correct your spelling
first
cant
change or move it because Correct your spelling
can't
your
Correct your spelling
you're
bussy
,maybe Correct your spelling
busy
i
can Change the capitalization
I
to
do that.Change the verb form
apply
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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to write in full sentences with correct punctuation.
coherence and cohesion
Clearly separate your ideas into different paragraphs. Each paragraph should focus on one main idea.
task achievement
Be polite and formal while writing to your landlord. Use appropriate greetings and closings.
task achievement
You explained the problems clearly, which is important for communication.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,