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The charts below provide information on popular modes of transport in the city of Cambridge for the years 2008 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below provide information on popular modes of transport in the city of Cambridge for the years 2008 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
the following chart gives us the common transporting way in
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Cambridge
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cambridge city
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Cambridge City
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 in the decade between 2008 and 2018 as we can see in 2008
the
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cars were the most popular
transporting
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transport
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 method with
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a
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 percentage
42
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of 42
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%
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 it decreased by 22% after 10 years in 2018
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 the buses were
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30% and it went down minimally by 5%
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 bicycles increased
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dramatically
dramtically
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dramatically
 from 17% all the way up to 30%
lastly
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 the walking went up from 11% up to 25%

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