Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter: suggest someone who deserves the reward mention what they have done to help the community say what reward you would like to give this person

Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing
this
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letter to mention a person who is contributing to
society
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from every corner. I am residing in XG
society
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on Hurontario and
Englinton
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Eglinton
road. It is very famous for
the
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neat and clean environment.
Along with
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this
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,
security
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the security
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system around my
neighborhood
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is quite good. I would like to contribute the credit behind
this
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to one of my
society
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old
society
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member
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members
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. He is name is Mr. Sam and is
retired
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a retired
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army officer. He had served his 40 years
to
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in
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the service. After their
retirement
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retirement,
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they moved to our
society
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and he
is
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has been
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living in your
society
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from
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for
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last
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the last
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3 to 4 years. Our
societ
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society
has changed
alot
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a lot
once he
become
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becomes
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secretary. Before, the environment was good
such
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as there
was
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were
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no plants and trees around our home. He planted
hundred
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hundreds
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of new flowers and plants. Since that time every individual
is
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has been
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taking care of
that
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those
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plants from my
society
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.
Moreover
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, more than four houses were robbed before but he built
very
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a very
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strong security system. No one can enter my house without
security
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a security
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code. Since
,
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apply
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he came to our
society
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, it has
been
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changed a lot. I would like to recommend
to appreciate
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appreciating
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him with
the
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a
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lot of respect and
give
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giving
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him
reward
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the reward
a reward
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of
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for
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the appreciation. Please let me know if you would like to know more details. Yours Sincerely, Sim.

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coherence and cohesion
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task achievement
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positive
You provided good examples of contributions made by Mr. Sam.
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