The bar chart depicts households owning and renting accommodation proportion in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
, it is immediately apparent that homeownership experienced an upward tendency, Linking Words
whereas
rental Linking Words
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had a descending trend. Meanwhile, it is noticeable that the highest percentage of rented Fix the agreement mistake
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houses
saw on
the first year from the time measured.
Between 1918 and 1971, the number of families in owned property Verb problem
was seen in
were decreasing
steadily from nearly below 80% to Wrong verb form
decreased
a
half of Remove the article
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population
. Correct article usage
the population
However
, Linking Words
rented
category experienced Correct article usage
the rented
a
moderate growth Correct article usage
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by
almost 30%, Change preposition
of
where
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which
it
started from almost a quarter to evened out at 50%. Both categories had been levelled off at the same portion in 1971 before it changed Correct pronoun usage
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on
the next period.
Between 1971 and 2011, the percentage of households who owned a place to live rose significantly and finished at 65%, Change preposition
to
although
it peaked at 68% in 2001. Linking Words
In contrast
, there was a gradual decline in the proportion of rented accommodation in the second period when it ended at 32%, but it hit a low of just above 35% in 2001.Linking Words
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