Some people say that cooking food at home is a waste of time. They claim that good restaurants are better and can make modern living easier and less stressful. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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that good restaurants are better and can make
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modern
lives easier and less stressful. From my
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, I strongly disagree with
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view. It is understandable why some believe that good restaurants are better and can make modern living easier and less stressful.
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is that people in
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day and age are too busy to cook for
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so they choose
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out to eat at a restaurant. In
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mordern
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modern
day not hard to find a place to have a good meal and
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of them is
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affordable
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budget .
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make
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the mordern
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mordern
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modern
community not
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cook a meal at home and have more time to
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their life quality. But
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sound is not
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as it
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. I
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convinced that individuals should cook a meal by themselves. One of the
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is that it will provide a feeling of
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about their food because they can choose
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for cooking.
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, some people
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not feel cooking themselves is stressful or complex. They
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after a long day hard-working and
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good meals for
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themselves
. In conclusion, there are sufficient grounds to reject the view that cooking at home is
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stressful
and boring. It is my belief that cooking a meal at home makes people have better life quality.

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Make sure your introduction clearly states your opinion. Introduce the main points you will discuss.
coherence cohesion
Use connectors like 'firstly,' 'secondly,' and 'finally' to organize your points better.
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Provide specific examples to support your points, such as a personal cooking experience or a health benefit.
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You express a clear opinion on the topic, which is important.
coherence cohesion
Your conclusion summarizes your view well, reinforcing your opinion.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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