Some people believe that car-free days are effective ways to reduce air pollustion. However, others argue that there are other ways that are more effective. Discuss both vies and give your own opinion.

In the modern era,

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is a global concern. Some individuals assume that there are more days that having no car on the road is an effective method. In the meantime, others hold a view that there are different alternative ways rather than the car-free. The two aforementioned perspectives will be discussed thoroughly in the following paragraphs before presenting my own view. On the one hand, it obviously can be seen that car smoke is the most common reason for

air

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pollution

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. So the more people not using cars the less impact on the atmosphere.

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, a recent report illustrated that the rate of dust breeze in Ha Noi, Viet Nam's capital, tremendously increased because of the traffic.

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, if the rule of car-free days is commenced gradually, the quality of ozone will be improved.

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method, there are abundant ways to reduce

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pollution

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.

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, a regulation should be considered to reduce the

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pollutants from factory areas.

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, a strict penalty

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be in practice to give all the factory's owners a lesson about the influence of

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pollutants. Take Japan

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, there was a manufacturing plant that threw their factory rubbish into the sea, and

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created a protest wind among the nation

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globally.

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leads to the government taking action to deter the others. In conclusion,

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traffic plays a main role in making

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pollution

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grow, and car-free days

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one of the effective solutions, still there are a lot of ways to reduce the impact

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as a heavier penalty or strict regulation. In my opinion, the first method might be the one

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useful but the others still need to be combined at the same time for more effect.