Buying a
is a primary need and
a priority for some
. In a certain condition,
are not able to afford
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and choose to rent a
. In my opinion, I believe that renting is the most appropriate way in order to make our
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more controlled rather than forcing
toCorrect pronoun usage
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get a
without enough income.
In developing countries, most families put owning a
as their number one target of getting
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or income. In Indonesia,
, there are many
lending money from
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because they
thoughtWrong verb form
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it
willWrong verb form
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be much better to pay
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for
dozensAdd the preposition
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years rather than
spendingWrong verb form
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money monthly for renting
an Correct article usage
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accommodation.
statistics, affording a
requires multiple times of
’s salary in
country, which
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impossible to buy a
in just
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years. Meanwhile,
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will demand
who
lentWrong verb form
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to pay high interest for finishing the debt even in a
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period.
Renting a
is an alternative way to stay in a
in tackling
issue.
, there are a lot of owners
provideWrong verb form
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a complete facilitiesCorrect the article-noun agreement
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ofChange preposition
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rented houses
withChange preposition
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affordable prices.
, it is possible for those who have still low income to save money more to buy their own
in the future. From my perspective, it will be easier
for handlingChange preposition
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financial stability
to saveChange preposition
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for
certainAdd an article
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period of time than paying
over Change preposition
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high interest to
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bankFix the agreement mistake
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debt.
To be able to have an accommodation to live is
’s consideration and determination, followed by their own priority towards their way of life. I believe that renting is the best decision to
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in order to
managingChange the verb
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family
stability even buying is a good option for those who want to rapidly own a
.