The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given flowchart represents the
process
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of
glass
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recycling. A brief overview is that the
process
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starts with throwing
glass
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products into recycle bins and concludes with the final products being reused in supermarkets.
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the
process
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is divided into 2 main stages, preparation and reformation. The first stage of the
process
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starts with
glass
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bottles
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being thrown away into the right recycle trash bins.
Next,
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the same
bottles
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will be picked up by a specialized truck that
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delivers
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to the treatment plant. At
this
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factory, the
bottles
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are washed and sterilized in order to remove any unwanted excesses. Turning to the next stage where the clean
bottles
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are
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crushed and melted down by machines. The liquid
form
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from
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glass
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the glass
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then
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gets poured into moulds that form
into
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the original shape. After that, the moulded
bottles
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are left to cool down and into shape before getting ready for delivery to supermarkets where they will be reused.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, glass, bottles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • recycled
  • stages
  • collection
  • waste glass
  • sources
  • bottles
  • jars
  • windows
  • transported
  • recycling facility
  • sorted
  • color
  • processes
  • cleaned
  • impurities
  • labels
  • caps
  • crushed
  • cullet
  • raw material
  • melted
  • furnace
  • temperature
  • molded
  • new glass products
  • distribution
  • consumers
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