Last month you had a holiday abroad where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn’t write earlier invite them to come and stay with you.

Dear Sam , I hope
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letter finds you in excellent health and best spirits. I must say , it was a great time when I came to Singapore for a vacation and stayed with you at your place. I am really grateful for your positive and
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welcoming nature and thanks for sponsoring me to get
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to your country . I got the pictures that you sent me via e-mail ,
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all looked exquisite and incredible .
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, the background with scenic views enhances the beauty of the pictures .
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trip really
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me to unwind from the hustle
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and proved me as a stress buster which devaluated
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anxiety and
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prosperity to my life. I apologize for the late reply
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I was swamped with my office tasks which were pending and yesterday, I
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submitted the final project which was assigned by my manager before the holidays. I would like you to invite
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India whenever you have time and we will have fun . Let me know a week before so , I
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apply day off from my work . I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Harvi

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coherence and cohesion
Try to organize your ideas more clearly. Each paragraph should have one main idea.
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Make sure to express your thoughts in a simpler way for better understanding.
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Your friendly tone is great for the letter.
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You included all necessary information as per the task.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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