The charts give information about the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

The charts give information about the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts give information about the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The table displays details of
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citizens
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ages in
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yemen
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and
italy
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Italy
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by 2000 and
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prediction
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of
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2050 . Generally , by the predictions of 2050
old
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60+ people in
italy
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are more than
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yemen
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. But
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yemen
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citizen
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from age 15-59 was more than
italy
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. The
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yemen
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percentage in 2000 shows that 50.1%
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around 0-14 ,
while
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others from 15-59 are 46.3% .
finally
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, 60 years and above are 3.6% . By 2050 predictions 0-14
decreases
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to 37.0% . but for 15-59 it has increased to 57.3% same goes for 60 and above it had reached 5.7% Italy
citizens
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count for
nation
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in 2000 for 0-14 was 14.2% and 15-59 was 61.6% and
finally
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60+ was 24.1% . By 2050 predictions 60+
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increased to 42.3% . But for 15-59
citizens
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population decreased to 46.2% and for 0-14 downward to 11.5%
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, by 2050 prediction Italy
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citizens
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culclation
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calculation
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that
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old people have
bigger
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a bigger
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amount than
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in yemen
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yemen
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.and
for
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15-59
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yemen
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has
bigger
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number than Italy and
for
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citizens
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0-14 is in
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yemen
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Yemen
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more
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than
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italy
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words citizens, yemen with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreases" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • age demographics
  • age structure
  • population distribution
  • youthful population
  • ageing population
  • life expectancy
  • birth rate
  • demographic shift
  • population projection
  • median age
  • dependents
  • working-age population
  • elderly dependents
  • geriatric
  • fertility rate
  • migration
  • demographic trends
  • baby boomers
  • demographic dividend
  • population pyramid
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