The bar chart shows the percentage of small , medium, large companies which used social media for business purposes between 2012 to 2016.

The bar chart shows the percentage of small , medium, large companies which used social media for business purposes between 2012 to 2016.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart shows the percentage of small , medium, large companies which used social media for business purposes between 2012 to 2016.
The bar chart illustrates the using social media
for
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by
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three
companies
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which
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apply
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( small ,
medium
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and large ) for
thier
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their
business
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at
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in
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2012 ,2013, 2014,2015 and 2016 .
overall
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, the biggest rates of all
companies
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in2014
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in 2014
and 2016 which shows
the
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that
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small ,
medium
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,
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and lagre
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lagre
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large
companies
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the
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apply
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increase
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increased
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of
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in
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useing
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using
of
the
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apply
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social media. In
the
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apply
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2013 ,2014 ,
2016
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and 2016
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appears
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apply
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the high percentages in each three
companies
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, in 2013 at small
business
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exactly
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of exactly
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30 ,
medium
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business
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nearly
of
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apply
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50 , and large
business
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nearly 80.
Then
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2014
its
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it was
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around (35,49 ,
88
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and 88
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,respectively)
.and
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and
the biggest rates from all which is in 2016 the small so nearly
of
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apply
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50 and
medium
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53 and 79. on
other
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the other
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hands
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hand
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, in 2012 ,2015 of chart shows bit lower rates , in 2012 the small ,
medium
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and large
appears
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appeared
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(
28,32,78
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at 28,32,78
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,
respectiviely
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respectively
)
.with
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With
respect
2015
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to 2015
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for the three businesses
for
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apply
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small and
medium
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exactly 30 ,
the
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and the
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large
show
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showed
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around 52.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words companies, medium, business with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Digital landscape
  • Market competition
  • Customer engagement strategies
  • Adoption rate
  • Comparative growth
  • Fluctuations
  • Entities
  • Proportions
  • Embracing
  • Predicts
  • Trends
  • Uptake rates
  • Substantial
  • Decline
  • Interpretations
  • Engagement
  • Noticeable
  • Implications
  • Consistently
  • Summarizing
  • Reflecting
  • Implications
  • Predicting
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