Nowadays communities take advantage from significant relationships that we have with foreigners through several way like international tourism and economic benefits. There are certainly many logical reasons to support this point which will be discussed in this essay.

Nowadays communities take advantage
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significant relationships that we have with foreigners through several
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like international
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and economic benefits. There are certainly many logical reasons to support
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point which will be discussed in
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essay. The first and perhaps the most significant reason is
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benefits for the
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. If in one
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the
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is so popular, it means that
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's economy
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on
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, Foreigners will spend their money on luxury hotels, souvenirs, excursions and
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on traditional food like plov in Uzbekistan or sushi in Japan.
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,
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helps reduce unemployment by creating new jobs,
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as tour guides and various service positions. Another major reason to agree is culture
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, foreigner and inhabitant can
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their traditions or culture
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as food or whatever. Another example is that it is too popular in Uzbekistan, there
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inhabitants are too hospitable and happy to meet every tourist from another
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. The second main reason in terms of global
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business
is knowledge and technology
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. International
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businesses
help with developing technology and
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managment
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, when two large companies decide to
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their employee or
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, they can study several certain things which will help them in their
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. Another example
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is about two Europe
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which shared with
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and
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helped
to each other
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researching new
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places. Another benefit
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global
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business
is International business partnerships, which
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better mutual understanding between countries. When people from different cultures work together, they learn to appreciate each other's values and customs.
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cooperation helps reduce conflicts and contributes to global peace and stability. In conclusion, societies benefit from strong relationships
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with
foreigners through international
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and global
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business
. I strongly believe that it is too
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beneficial
with
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collaborating
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company
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and exchanging cultures.

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Make sure each paragraph clearly connects to your main point. Use linking words to join ideas smoothly.
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Add more specific examples to support your ideas. This helps to show your understanding better.
task achievement
You clearly stated your main points and provided reasons to support them.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
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