Nowadays, shorter working
Use synonyms
week
Fix the agreement mistake
weeks
has
been applied in many countries, reflecting some urgencies. With these circumstances, I firmly believe that Correct subject-verb agreement
have
it
practice should be Change the pronoun
its
adapted
by more countries Correct your spelling
adopted
due to
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environment
and workers' personal and professional Replace the word
environmental
life
considerations.
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Firstly
, Linking Words
the
better Correct article usage
a
quality
of Use synonyms
environment
can be achieved by applying shorter working Add an article
the environment
week
, as the Use synonyms
pollution
rate will Use synonyms
be decreases
. In some big cities, especially the business district, most Change the verb form
be decreased
of
Change preposition
apply
the
people Correct article usage
apply
are riding
their private vehicles to go Wrong verb form
ride
work
, and some of them are Change preposition
to work
also
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used
Wrong verb form
using
the
public transport. Correct article usage
apply
Hence
, the Linking Words
pollution
level Use synonyms
are
very high Change the verb form
is
due to
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Correct article usage
the numbers
numbers
of vehicles Fix the agreement mistake
number
in
the road, decreasing the air Change preposition
on
quality
. In Use synonyms
respond
to that, by reducing working Replace the word
response
days
from five to four Use synonyms
days
Use synonyms
in
a Change preposition
apply
week
, the existing Use synonyms
pollution
will decrease, as more people Use synonyms
are stay
at home.
Change the verb form
are staying
Secondly
, four working Linking Words
days
a Use synonyms
week
can increase Use synonyms
their
Change the word
the
quality
of both Use synonyms
personal
and professional Correct pronoun usage
their personal
Use synonyms
life
. As the working Fix the agreement mistake
lives
days
become shorter, professionals can spend more time with their families at home. Use synonyms
For example
, they can Linking Words
spending
time for Change the verb form
spend
be spending
a
dinner with their partner or Correct article usage
apply
making
their kids happy by playing together. In return their happiness level will increase and they have no issue with mental health. Change the verb form
make
be making
Subsequently
, a good personal Linking Words
life
will affect their performance at work, ensuring workers' readiness to give their Use synonyms
bests
.
In conclusion, the idea to shorten working weeks Correct your spelling
best
offer
various benefits, ranging from reducing Correct subject-verb agreement
offers
pollution
in the air Use synonyms
as well as
increasing the Linking Words
quality
of workers' personal and professional Use synonyms
life
. Use synonyms
Hence
, Linking Words
this
practice can be adopted by many governments in their countries.Linking Words
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