Some people think that the government should spend money on adult’s population who can’t read and write while other not. To what extend to you agree or disagree?

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countries have people who don't know how to read and write and the

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should help them ,it's argued that the

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should spend money to teach them

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others do not , in

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essay I give my opinion and discuss both views , even though I think it's a good step for teaching the illiterate .

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with , I believe that teaching adults could be more beneficial to the

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on different basis

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,after they teach them they could be more useful for

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human labour ,

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, if there is a shortage of human resources they could do much help after they teaching them , and

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think some of them are unemployment which leads to being more burden on the

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if they teaching them , and they could be part of the community that they in ,

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change their life standard .

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, people who have an education and move from layer to

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have to develop different skills which open them a different opportunity and better jobs if they were are still illiterate,

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, teaching seniors requires the person to know read and write which important to know about . in conclusion , I believe that the

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should be teaching the illiterate due for a lot of reasons that

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mention and some of it does not occur to me right now so, in my opinion, I agree with the second opinion and get used to it