The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map shows three proposed sites (A, B, and C) for a new supermarket in Ellington.
Overall
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, the city is divided by a motorway and a railway, with each potential
site
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located in a different part of Ellington. There is a golf course park
situate
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in the west, an airport in the southeast, and the smaller town of
Hamford
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Hanford
to the northwest
with
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at
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15
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a 15
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km distance.
Site
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A lies in the city
center
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centre
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within a traffic-free zone, surrounded by both residential and industrial areas. Its location near a park and close access to the railway makes it convenient for local residents and workers.
Site
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B is situated in the northeastern countryside, far from housing but right beside the motorway.
This
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may appeal to shoppers from outside the city who travel by car.
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,
Site
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C, in the southern rural area, offers better proximity to residential and industrial areas than
Site
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B and is
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near the railway. Its closeness to the airport could benefit commuters and visitors

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words site with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proposed sites
  • supermarket
  • locations
  • central
  • outskirts
  • residential areas
  • transport hubs
  • proximity
  • major roads
  • landmarks
  • accessibility
  • competition
  • shopping district
  • industrial area
  • green spaces
  • logistic ease
  • isolated
  • densely populated
  • traffic
  • customer reach
  • expansion possibilities
  • accessibility
  • customer base
  • logistical convenience
  • recommend
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