The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map illustrates the developments which took place in the town of Fosbury between 1980 and 2015.

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, a comparison of the two maps reveals a significant transformation from

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recreational area to a large entertainment place. In the year 1980, on the west of the main road, there were two big tennis courts which were converted into a sports centre in 35 years.

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, a car park was

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established during

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period. Regarding the north-west of the town, the park was rearranged, and terraced homes were added to the vacant space.

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, private houses situated

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the top of the city did not undergo any changes throughout the given period.

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, the main road

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was expanded. Two additional ways were added, and the centre of the road was reshaped into a circle.

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the south-east side of the maps, the developments are noticeable. The complete green fields were replaced by several warehouses over the period of 35 years. On the north-east of the city, the terraced houses knocked down made way for the

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of a car park and a supermarket.

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, the hotel did not see any improvements, but a

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shop and a block of flats were constructed in the south of it.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

210 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

urban development
rural layout
open spaces
housing areas
infrastructure
residential areas
road networks
commercial areas
economic growth
green spaces
urban expansion
public amenities
community development
demolished
renovated
modernization process
transportation infrastructure
landscape modification
environmental conservation
preservation

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The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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Governments should offer a free health care system to their citizens rather than relying on private health care. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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