You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, - Describe the situation, - Explain why you cannot continue at this time, - Say what action you would like to take

Dear Mr. James, I hope
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letter finds you well. I am writing to inform you that I am unable to continue your part-time web designer course. As you are already aware
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I was juggling between a
full- time
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job and
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part-time course for quite some time;
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, now
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is
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changed as I
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now promoted to the position of
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Manager for my
companie's
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companies
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new
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.
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new
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is held in Canada
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, I am required to move for a year to successfully complete
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project
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, I am unable to attend your
complusory
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compulsory
in-person evening lectures. To resolve
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matter, I would appreciate it if you could
accomodate
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accommodate
me in providing online lectures at
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EST timings. If online
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classes
are unfeasible, I request you to cancel my admission. I hope you can understand my situation and cooperate in finding a suitable solution. Yours sincerely, John Doe

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task achievement
Your letter is clear and addresses all points. However, try to add more detail about the course to strengthen your response.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure to check for small errors in spelling, such as 'complusory' instead of 'compulsory'.
coherence and cohesion
Use more linking words to connect your ideas better, such as 'however' or 'therefore'. This will help your flow.
greeting and closing
You have a polite greeting and closing, which is excellent for a letter.
task achievement
You explain your situation well and provide a clear reason for your request.
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