A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - Give contact details for when you are away Give instructions about how to care for your pet Describe other household duties You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Deepika, I am writing

this

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letter to inform you about our one month trip

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back home, India and there are some duties which I request you to

takeover

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take over

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in my absence.

Firstly

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, I can explain

you

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to you

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some responsibilities of our dog, Ruffle whom you already know. In terms of eating, he is a nice baby as he likes to eat

vegeterian

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vegetarian

meal

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and never

put

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us in trouble

abput

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about

not completing his food.

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this

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, he likes to go for

walk

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a walk

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twice

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a day usually early morning and evening around 5. As he is a snow dog, he gets sometimes irritated when he feels hot and

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is the reason we prefer to give him

bath

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in cold water to make him relax.

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, I want to remind you about his ear appointment which is scheduled

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for

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June 15th,2025 as his ear is getting infected because of

weather

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the weather

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and

doctor

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the doctor

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will give him some ear drops that you can put

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instructions. Apart from

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the dog's

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duties, I will be thankful if you help me with some household chores as well including cleaning the home once

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a week will be good as it will be closed for one month.

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, if you please open the laundry room every

saturday

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for rentals living downstairs

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great

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a great

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help

for

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me. I really thank you for helping me to take care

all

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of all

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my stuff. I will bring some gifts and sweets for you. Thank you, Muskan Jand

jandmuskan6Thu Jun 05 2025

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greeting and closing

Make sure to include a proper greeting and conclusion. Add a friendly close to leave a positive impression.

single idea per paragraph

Try to separate different ideas into distinct paragraphs to improve clarity.

complete response

Be more clear on your contact details so your friend can easily reach you if needed.

suitable writing tone

You have a friendly and warm tone throughout the letter, which is great for communication with a friend.

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6
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

250 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

grateful
contact information
emergency
feeding schedule
exercise routine
medical needs
vet
preferences
habits
household duties
collecting mail
watering plants
taking out trash
comfortable
questions
warm message
enjoy
relax
have fun

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