The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates information about average monthly temperatures in three major cities
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, it can be seen that the Paris city showed a significant growth during the stage.
while
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the
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sydney
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experienced a second growth trend In detail, the the average monthly temperatures of DUBAI were 20 and 35 average respectively in Aug went up sharply through the period, reaching 36 as the highest in the period In the meantime, the second trend
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graph
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it
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paris
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Paris
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it climbed to 10 in Apr. and
then
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remained
15
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until 20.from 5 to 20. it accounted
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gradual increase to more than
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Sydney
and continued with a gradual rise to 20 two times
Jul
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in Jul
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and Aug Moving on
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to Sydeny
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Sydney
, in early Feb, 25 was the highest among
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Dubai and Paris it was almost twice as high as the lowest one.
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, it saw a steep fall to 14 in Jul recording the lowest percentage,compared to the other cities.
subsuquently
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subsequently
, there was a rise to 23 but
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Sydney
it was still the lowest
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the end of the period

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average monthly temperatures
  • line graph
  • trends
  • seasonal variations
  • temperature ranges
  • data points
  • climatic factors
  • latitude
  • correlations
  • anomalies
  • fluctuations
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • climate zones
  • thermometer readings
  • degrees Celsius/Fahrenheit
  • summertime
  • wintertime
  • meteorological
  • temperate
  • subtropical
  • mercury levels
  • interpolate
  • mean values
  • temperatures soar
  • temperatures plummet
  • heatwave
  • cold snap
  • mild
  • cool
  • warm
  • chilly
  • frigid
  • scorching
  • freezing
  • temperate
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