Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family thant eating out in restaurants or canteens. do you agree or disagree?

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ought to be the best option

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of having a meal outside.

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certain

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extent

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various

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options, I will argue that the

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would be

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potent. There is no doubt that

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serves many dishes to eat. Since

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women

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have limited time to cook

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, because they have to do other household jobs

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as

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care of their children and washing

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cloths

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, they do not have much time to prepare it including searching a new ways to cook new dishes.

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, going outside paves the

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towards to

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trend. There have been multiple

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that have proved that in

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families,

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masses often

go out either for breakfast or for lunch.

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, going out for

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could be costlier,

if at

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the Contemporary era,

whole

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family go for lunch at 5

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5-star

hotel, it would cost $ 1000 which is equal to the two

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grocery for a whole family. Another

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factor

is the healthy diet.

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prepared at home is not only

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but

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contains essential nutrients which are required for the

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development;

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,

by

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this

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family

could

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get a balanced diet.

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, a study was conducted

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"Oxford University" where it found that children who

eats

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eat

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homemade

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are more healthier

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then

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those who prefer to eat in

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the canteen

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. In conclusion, despite the fact that restaurant provides more options for eating, I

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personally

opine that

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cooked at home is

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more potent option as

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not only pocket friendly but

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provides

nutrions

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nutrients

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the body

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