The diagram below shows the different steps to make a simple ice cream recipe at home.

The diagram below shows the different steps to make a simple ice cream recipe at home.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the different steps to make a simple ice cream recipe at home.
The diagram below demonstrates the steps of making a simple ice cream
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at home. There are six steps to enjoy a handmade ice cream starting with the preparation and ending the process by hardening the
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.
First,
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start preparing the ingredients and mix them up together in a pot.
Second,
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place the pot in the oven to start the pasteurization
then
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mix up slowly until ageing.
Third,
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freeze the
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by putting it in the fridge for some time. The fourth step is to add extra nuts or flavours to the
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. The
last
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step is to wait for two hours until the mix hardens.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Ingredient
  • Utensil
  • Heavy cream
  • Vanilla extract
  • Frothy
  • Dissolve
  • Freezer-safe container
  • Prevent freezer burn
  • Ice crystals
  • Smooth texture
  • Soften
  • Serve
  • Toppings
  • Fruits
  • Syrup
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