The graph below gives information about household car ownership in Britain from 1990 - 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

The graph below gives information about household car ownership in Britain from 1990 - 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below gives information about household car ownership in Britain from 1990 - 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
The graph provides information regarding household
car
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owhership
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ownership
in the UK between 1990 and 2015, with its prediction by 2030.
It is clear that
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most
households
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have
one
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car
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. Notably, the percentage of those
owned
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who owned
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one
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/two or more cars increases throughout the period,
whereas
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the proportion of those without any vehicle drops drastically. Focusing first on those with
one
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car
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, in 1990, approximately 35% of
households
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owned
one
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vehicle,
whereas
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by 2005, the figure increased dramatically by 20%.
However
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, by 2015, it dropped to
arounf
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around
40% and by 2030, is expected to be relatively stable. As for the two other groups, at the beginning of the period, nearly 10% of
households
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had two or more cars, which remained unchanged by 2005. After that, the figure started to rise steadily and by 2030, is predicted to reach exactly the same figure as those for
one
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-
car
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owners. Regarding the
households
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without
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car
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a car
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, the percentage of
this
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group drops dramatically from over 50 to roughly 15% throughout the period.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words car, households, one with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drops" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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