In many countries, the number of people suffering from stress is increasing. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to tackle it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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number of people who have been suffering from

stress

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. Two significant causes are a large

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of

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society

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pressure

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, both of which contribute to mental issues

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anxious

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. Addressing these issues by giving a sustainable

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as working

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limitation can lead those who were in

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condition to feel better. One of the principal causes of

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a long period of

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with so many

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missions can act as a deterrent for workers to relax and refill their energy.

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propensity is vulnerable to their mental

health

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, getting rid of their spirit valuation and putting them in jeopardy. Needless to say, they face many trials and tribulations which is a precondition of

stress

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the large

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of

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contributes to mental

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and adverse

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for workers, leading them to live stressfully under circumstances Another cause of

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negative problem came from social

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today , the development of social media

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mean

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that each

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general dweller

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of comparison from others related to their ability and

behaviors

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over

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success of some people in internet who were just in young age. Indeed,

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creates

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social

pressure

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for each individual,

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leading them to run up against

low valuation

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feelings

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, making them

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and over-anxious.

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, these problems can be tackled if the government enact a sustainable

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regarding

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limitation. If each company can guarantee the working

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, workers will have enough

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for relaxing

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to relax

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and

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their

life

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lives

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,

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can lead them to decrease

stress

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and refill their energy.

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, by giving dwellers a mental

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can explain

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for citizens about their role, thanking them for

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work

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that the

manufacture

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has been developing, yet , with

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approach

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, each worker would feel they have their own valuations , phase in their mental

health

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. Ultimately, these strategies can create better

feelings

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for the populace , contributing to a

non stressful

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non-stressful

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environment,

improving

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the mental

health

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of each person. In Conclusion, both an enormous

amount

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of

work

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and social

pressure

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contribute significantly to

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suffering from

stress

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inclination. If

government

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the government

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publish a sustainable

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related to

time

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limitation and mental

supports

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support

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, they can help people reduce their anxious

feelings

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and ameliorate their

stress

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conditions