The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar

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graph

gives

informations

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information

pieces of information

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about the

ereas

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areas

visited by multiple

people

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living in Canada.

Overall

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, the chart shows that the cinema is the most attractive place for

poupular

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popular

people

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In contrast

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theatrue

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there

theatre

was

the

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unfavorable

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unfavourable

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place to

the

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apply

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most individuals.

while

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the

avrage

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average

people

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who

born

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were born

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canada

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Canada

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prefer

zoo

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and

library

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libraries

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. cinema accounts for a large proportion of

people

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born in

Canad

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Canada

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and

English speaking

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English-speaking

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countries with around 70% and 65%, respectively .

While

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library

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the library

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represnt

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represent

represents

the most

significat

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significant

ratio 55% for

people

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born in other countries.

dr.nadahamdiTue Jun 10 2025

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

90 words

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The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It will be better to have wide use of driverless cars for individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.