Nowadays, academic institution apply crucial concept in educating it's student. People view that collage have to provide strong practical training instead of prioritizing theories. This statement is in line with my idea. This essay will discuss some reason and argument including the student understanding, learning process and learning time.

Universitas have to provide

theoritical

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practical practice since it has many advantages for

students

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Students

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can

easly

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easily

understand when they do practice direct. Direct training allows them to

experience

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the process

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gaining

skills

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students

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can learn long

internship

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in the hotel,

affices

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offices

office

affixes

, etc.

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Additionally

students

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can remember their experiences when they do direct training

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company.

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, direct training is a

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in mastering a skill. Another reason is,

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students

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who

experience

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direct practice will increase their

self confidence

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through intensive training

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direct

experience

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and the challenges that may

on facing

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Besides

student

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can prepare for their career in the future based on their

skills

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Student

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can

also

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gain better hands-on

experience

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and social

skills

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student

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students

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can work in

grups

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groups

, which

help

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them develop social,

comunication

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communication

, and

homwork

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homework

skills

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On the other hand

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, training creates higher error rates as it is a practical activity.

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Student

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are more prone to making mistakes, especially if they are still in the learning phase.

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can be a part of the learning process, if there is

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inadequate

supervision, these mistakes could have negative consequences. In conclusion, educational institutions must continue to strive to improve the quality of education by applying relevant and effective concepts

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and paying attention to the needs and abilities of

students

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Arni AqlinaTue Jun 10 2025

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grammar

Make sure to use proper grammar and spelling to make your ideas clear.

cohesion

Try to connect your ideas better with linking words like 'firstly', 'moreover', and 'however'.

task achievement

Provide specific examples to support your points to make your essay stronger.

content

You provided valid reasons for the importance of practical training.

structure

Your essay has a clear introduction and conclusion.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

219 words

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In the future, all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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