Teaching profession is decreasing day by day. the government should encourage students to go for this noble profession.why is this profession declining and now should the government encourage people to go for this noble profession?

Teaching is a dignified profession.Teachers are
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for the society that educates all other professions.
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it seems to be less favorite among youngsters these days.
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to encourage people to opt for
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field. There can be several factors which
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to
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decline.
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, youngsters don't find it very lucrative in terms of perks and salaries.
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, a teacher on
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average gets less than half of what is being offered in
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of engineering and
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old curriculum and outdated methods of teaching make it very boring and dull.
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the long working hours and extra workload add
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to the worst.
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, government teachers in some countries are subjected to undergo election duties and even sometimes they go door to door
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data and information
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of census surveys.
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youngsters particularly feel that there is very
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scope
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promotion.
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several steps can be taken to tackle the scenario.
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governments should raise
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salaries and should offer
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, incentives and timely
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in incomes.
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new methods
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aids should be incorporated to lure young aspirants.
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teachers shouldn't be overburdened with any unnecessary tasks in the name of multitasking. What is more important is that
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should make people feel
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about
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profession by creating more job opportunities and emphasizing its future benefits In
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I would like to reiterate that the need of
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is to create awareness among
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public.
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, the problem is not insurmountable, so steps can be taken to curb
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situation.

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