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11 June 2025, The pie charts below compare the proportion of energy capacity in gigawatts (GW) in 2015 with the predictions for 2040.

11 June 2025, The pie charts below compare the proportion of energy capacity in gigawatts (GW) in 2015 with the predictions for 2040.
The pie chart depicts the percentage of
energy
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capacity
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 in 2015 and predictions for 2040, measured in gigawatts.
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, the percentage of fossil fuels is expected to decrease, as that of other renewable
energy
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 and nuclear is predicted to drop slightly. Meanwhile, the proportion of solar and wind
energy
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 will likely increase significantly. In 2015, there were 6.688 GW of
energy
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capacity
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 with fossil fuels making up the majority of
energy
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capacity
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, accounting for 64%.
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followed
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 by other
renewables
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renewable
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energy
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 at 23%, making up the second most common
energy
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.
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, the three
others
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energy
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, which were wind, nuclear, and solar
energy
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 recorded under 10% at 5%, 6%, and 2%, respectively. Regarding the predictions for 2040,
although
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 the total
energy
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 is projected to rise (11.678 GW), there is a decline
the
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energy
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capacity
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 of fossil fuels (44%).
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,
the
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apply
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other
renewables
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renewable
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energy
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also
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 predicted to fall slightly by only 2%.
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, solar and wind
energy
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 will likely
to
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rise sharply to 18% in the former and 12% in the latter,
while
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 nuclear
energy
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 only increase by 1%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, capacity with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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