The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about energy consumption in the USA since 1980, with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about energy consumption in the USA since 1980, with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about energy consumption in the USA since 1980, with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The line chart provides key information from a 2008 report about energy
consumption
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by fuel in the US since 1980, with projections until 2030. The units are measured in Quadrillion units.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that petrol and oil had the highest usage compared with other fuels. Coal and natural gas represented the same number at the beginning of the graph between 15 to 20 quadrillion.
Also
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, nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower illustrated the same units in nearly under 5.
According to
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what is shown in the diagram the petrol and oil had a fluctuated
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throughout the years interval of 1980 to 1995. After that, there was a gradual increase of more than 50 in the future. Coal and natural gas
also
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had a wave line between 1980 to 2015.
Then
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, coal sharply increased until reached 30
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,
whereas
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natural gas remained stable in
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. In terms of nuclear, solar/wind, and hydropower, they had similar
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, but nuclear had the highest among the three fuels.
While
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hydropower had the lowest
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • energy consumption
  • trends
  • marked increase
  • dominant source
  • modest increase
  • projections
  • renewable energy
  • nuclear energy
  • noticeable decline
  • span
  • petroleum
  • natural gas
  • coal
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