Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagre

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and

comunity

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community

work

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so important because people

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less

believing

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in community service. In

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schools

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schools,

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children

has

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to learn about

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the communities and helping society that`s how we can give basic knowledge to pupils. In my

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opinion

,

schools

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has

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to take responsibility

to teach

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for teaching

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their

students

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about

charity

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and their

importance

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so

i am

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completly

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completely

agree with the

statment

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statement

. In

a

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apply

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school

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life

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life,

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teachers

has

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to organise

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this

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these kinds

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kind

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of events where

students

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has

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to contribute

in

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to

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community services.

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school

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Schools

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can help

temple

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temples

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,

poor

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and poor

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communities and they can

tech

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teach

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free sports and

aslo

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also

provide sports

instrument

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instruments

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to

rural

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the rural

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public, so

student

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students

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can

leran

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learn

and see the

importance

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of

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this

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these kinds

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kind

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of events.

Schools

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also

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can raise

fund

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funds

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for

this

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, so

students

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and their parents can donate.

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, in winter

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school

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schools

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should donate warm clothes to

homeless

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the homeless

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with

help

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the help

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of pupils.

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, my

school

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donated 500 pairs of footwere to

the

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apply

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people who

was

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were

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living

in

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apply

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below

poverty

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the poverty

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line and

aslo

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also

those who

needed

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needed them

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, so

i

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realised the

importance

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of

charity

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when

i

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was

student

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a student

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. On

other

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hand, by not doing

upaid

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unpaid

paid

charity

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we cannot understand the

importance

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of

this

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public service. where

students

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don`t know about

charity

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and

meannig

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meaning

of

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they were never understand

meaning

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of

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help. Our little help can change someone`s life. That can put

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a smile

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on people who cannot afford

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a thing.

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, not only

school

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but parents

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to take

responsibilty

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responsibility

to teach

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for teaching

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this

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kind

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of thing to

child

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a child

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.

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, research from

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the university

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university

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of Delhi proves, if we

not

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do not

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teach

child

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a child

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to do

comunity

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community

work, they cannot be

succesful

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successful

in their future

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they don`t learn moral values. In conclusion,

schools

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and

collages

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colleges

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has

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have

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to

arrenge

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arrange

and

asign

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assign

this

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kind

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of service to

thier

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their

students

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,

this

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can develop human values in them.

while

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,

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apply

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who

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those who

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never learned

this

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kind

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of thing

they

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apply

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have poor value in

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their neighborhood

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neighborhood

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neighbourhood

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and society.