The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the distribution of
men
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and women who are unable to read or write across 6 regions over the past year.
Overall
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, there was a higher percentage of illiterate
females
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than
males
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throughout all 6 areas. Developed
countries
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had the least
men
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and women who could not read or write,
while
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both genders had the highest rates of illiteracy in South
Asia
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. Developed
countries
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, Latin American/Caribbean and East
Asia
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/Oceania had the lowest proportion of illiterates,
while
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Sub-Sahara Africa, Arab States and South
Asia
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had the highest number of people who were illiterate in the past year. Looking at
countries
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on the lower end of illiteracy rates, developed
countries
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had the lowest percentage of illiterate
men
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and women, with both values slightly above 0 per
cent
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. 10 per
cent
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of Latin American/Caribbean
men
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could not read or write,
while
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there were just above 10 per
cent
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of illiterate Latin American/Caribbean
females
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. In East
Asia
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/Oceania, there were twice as many illiterate
females
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as
males
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, with a percentage of 20 and under 10 respectively.
On the other hand
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, just more than 30 per
cent
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of Sub-Saharan African
males
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are illiterate, and there were less than 50 per
cent
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of the female population that are unable to read or write. In the Arab States, more than half of the female population
are
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illiterate, but only less than 30 per
cent
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of
men
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could not
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cannot
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read or write. South
Asia
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had the highest illiteracy rates across both genders, with between 50 to 60
percent
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per cent
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of
females
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and between 30 to 40
percent
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per cent
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of
males
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in the
last
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year.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words men, females, males, countries, asia, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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