The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where reevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where reevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where reevant.
The two given maps illustrate the information about road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
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, in 2010, a bus station and a public car park were built near the main building,
while
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before that, staff and customers had parked their cars in the same location.
However
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, the main and ring routes did not change. In 2007, there were only
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bus stops placed beside the hospital road for 6 labels,
whereas
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this
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line was created with two roundabouts at the crossroads in 2010.
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, these were joined with the bus station on the left side of the map.
According to
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the car park, before it
made
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another place for other people on the northern eastern, it needs to
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with either a staff or a doctor on the right side of the map.
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, both new buildings
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made for people to
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directly
to
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the hospital by crossing the road.

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