The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The schemes provide information about the planning of Southwest
Airport
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right now and in the future. It is clearly seen that the number of gates will be highly increased from now to
future
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plan. What else will be grown is the number of inputs and outputs of departures and arrivals.
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, the walkway will be replaced by a sky train. A more detailed look at the schemes reveals that
overall
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there will be a lot of changes
in
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apply
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next year. As we can see, new shops will appear next to the first gate, and
a
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check-in will take
another
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apply
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place in the
center
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centre
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of the
airport
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. The bag drop will take the check-in’s former place near passport control. New ATM points will
also
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be opened near the car hire,
two
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and two
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cafes in different parts of the
airport
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.
Overall
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, the changes
of
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at
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Southwest
Airport
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will be significant in the way of
gate’s
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gates
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increasing.

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task achievement
Try to clearly state the main features of the airport plans in the introduction and ensure all points are covered.
coherence and cohesion
Use linking words like 'firstly', 'next', and 'finally' to connect your ideas.
task achievement
You described some changes clearly, like the new shops and sky train.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • terminal
  • runway
  • refurbishment
  • redevelopment
  • amenities
  • car park
  • hangar
  • concourse
  • public transport hub
  • access roads
  • boarding gates
  • check-in desk
  • baggage claim
  • departure lounge
  • observation deck
  • duty-free shopping
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