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The graph below shows the population for India and China since the year 2000 and predicts population growth until 2050. Aruzhan 2

The graph below shows the population for India and China since the year 2000 and predicts population growth until 2050. Aruzhan 2
The line graph illustrates the comparison of the residents of two countries ,
India
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 and
China
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, between 2000 and 2050.
Overall
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, the first thing that we notice immediately is the gradual progress of both nations over the given time period. The population of
China
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 is predicted to decrease slightly,
while
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 the inhabitants of
India
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 might leap quickly in the future, becoming the second most populated area. In 2000,
China
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had
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 a larger nation than
India
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, with about 1,260,000,000 people compared to
India
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's 1,000,000,000. Over the next two decades, both countries experienced steady growth, but
India
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’s citizens rose more rapidly for the recorded time period. By around 2025, both areas are projected to have nearly equal populations, at approximately 1,450,000,000. After 2025, the number of Indian inhabitants is expected to exceed
China
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's and continue growing, reaching 1,650,000,000 by 2050.
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, the quantity of Chinese humans is forecast to peak marginally above 1,450,000,000 in 2030, after which it is considered to decline moderately, falling to 1,340,000,000 by 2050.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words india, china with synonyms.
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