You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket and you wish to complain to the supermarket authority about that. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter Say who you are Give details about the accident Suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents

Dear manager, My self Arshdeep Kaur and I am writing

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letter to inform you about my today's mild injury

while

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visiting your supermarket.

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morning I visited here at 09.15 to do my groceries. I have been using

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grocery store to purchase all my house stuff. I spent almost 45 minutes

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all

required

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things and

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the end, I moved to the juice section because my husband likes to drink. Unfortunately, I slipped over there. because the housekeeping staff mopped but did not put a caution sign. I

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did not notice

wet

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floor and tripped on the cart. It causes muscular injury and my doctor ordered me for 2 weeks bed rest.

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, I do not want to other customers suffer

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thing.

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, try to clean your place before opening hours if is it possible. So it would be better for you and

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percaution

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precaution

sections should be placed at every place which mopped out.

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a good way to inform others about

danger

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are my precious suggestions to save other people. Hope you will understand them and make efforts on my request. Yours sincerely, Arsh

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coherence and cohesion

Make sure to clearly separate your ideas into paragraphs, such as one for the accident and another for your suggestions.

task achievement

Use a polite tone throughout the letter and avoid phrases that may sound too direct or critical.

coherence and cohesion

Check for grammatical mistakes, such as missing words or punctuation errors, to ensure clarity.

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You have clearly stated who you are and the purpose of your letter.

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Your suggestions for preventing accidents show that you care about other customers' safety.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

195 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

incident
precautionary measures
inconvenience
enhanced supervision
safety protocols
liability
compensation
constructive response
prompt action
vigilant
maintenance
resolution
testimonial
surveillance
safeguard
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