You went to a museum with an elderly friend last week who found it difficult to walk around in the museum and figure out things. Write a letter to the management of the museum. In your letter, ● introduce yourself ● describe the problems or inconvenience faced ● suggest solutions to enhance the museum experience for elderly people

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Lisa, and I recently visited your

museum

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with an elderly friend, since

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we are

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both interested in your historical

museum

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Although

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we enjoyed the displays, we encountered some difficulties that I

fell

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feel

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should be brought to your attention. Not only was it hard for my friend to walk around

due to

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absence

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the absence

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of seating areas, but

also

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absence

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the absence

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of clear directional

sign

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signs

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made navigation difficult.

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, the exhibit

decriptions

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descriptions

were in small font

size

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sizes

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which

make

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it difficult to read for old visitors.

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, there were no staff

member

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members

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who easily

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there. Rather than letting elderly guests struggle during their visit,

arrange

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number of

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benches throughout the

museum

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, audio guides and, volunteer assistance could

also

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greatly improve the experience.

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, the content of the

museum

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is excellent, improving accessibility will make it even more inclusive. Thank you for considering

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this suggestions

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. I look forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Lisa

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task response

Make sure to clearly introduce yourself and why you are writing in the first paragraph.

coherence and cohesion

Use clear sentences to convey ideas, and group similar ideas together in the same paragraph.

task response

Try to provide more specific examples of how seating and staff can help the elderly more directly.

tone

The letter is polite and addresses the management respectfully.

task achievement

You provided practical suggestions which show thoughtfulness towards the elderly visitors.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

156 words

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