The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

Nowadays, obesity among

children

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has risen sharply over the

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decade in Western society.

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number of overweight youngsters

create

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really

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important

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for parents. I am of the opinion that the main cause of

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is limited physical

activity

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or some dietary habits.

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issue

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could lead to various health problems. As recent studies have found, being overweight has become a major cause of

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problems for

children

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in Western society. One of the main

reason

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is poor diets.

Young

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population usually try to learn and earn as much, as they can, resulting in

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lack

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of time for cooking, and purchasing both cheap and easily accessible food

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, some places like KFC or Burger King always provide high-sugar, high-fat and high-calorie cuisine.

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, these restaurants have a plethora of locations throughout the city, so the second reason is the

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of

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activity

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during the day. Youngsters are spending more and more time in a sitting position.

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:

sedentary

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lifestyle manifests itself

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plaiyng

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playing

videogames

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video games

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,

watching

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TV.

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type of hobby

lead

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to a decline in

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apply

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physucal

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physical

activity

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.

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habit, I believe can have

a long-term impacts

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on an

individuals

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well-being. The problem may include

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amount

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amounts

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of sugar in the blood, several heart diseases,

diebetes

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diabetes

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and

mental health

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issue

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. The

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problem might be created

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the toxic society

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as school, where

children

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are bullied because of

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excess weight.

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, some experts have discovered that obesity might influence

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children

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's ability to learn,

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the

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of concentration and low energy levels. In conclusion,

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is a controversial subject but I firmly believe that diets and

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of physical

activity

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have led to

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increasing trend of overweight

chidren

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children

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of

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issue

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is health problems, bullying and low marks at school. If more adults start to eat fast food and decrease the amount of their

activity

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during the day, the percentage of

overweight

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the overweight

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population will rapidly increase.