The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
The three pie charts illustrate the proportion of five different types of costs in school and how
them
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they
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changed over the period of 20 years.
Overall
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, teachers’ wages occupied the biggest part of the school’s total expenditure,
whereas
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insurance held the lowest percentage. The other types of payment kept fluctuating during the 20 years. The amount of salary and wages of
stuffs
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staff
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in the school, which included teachers’ salaries and other workers’ wages, held approximately 60% percent of the school’s total spending. The teachers’ salaries
kept
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remained at
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the highest rate all the time,
while
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other workers’ payment continuously dropped (from 28%,1981 to 15%,2001). Though the ratio of
cost
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the cost
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of insurance
kept
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remained
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the lowest, it increased slightly
during
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over
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the
20
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past 20
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years. Between 1981 and 1991, the share of money spent on resources increased from 15% to 20% but dramatically dropped to 9%
at the end
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of 2001.
However
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,
spendings
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spending
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of
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on
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furniture and equipment experienced an opposite development. The rate of furniture and equipment declined by 10% from 1981 to 1991 and grew sharply between 1991 and 2001 ( from 5% to 23%).

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget allocation
  • educational expenditure
  • financial management
  • infrastructure investment
  • evolution of costs
  • annual spending
  • strategic funding
  • capital outlay
  • operational costs
  • resource allocation
  • fiscal trends
  • cost analysis
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