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percentage
of yearly expenditure changed by a certain UK school in the years 1981,1991 Use synonyms
and
2001.
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, and
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, staff Linking Words
salariess
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salaries
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majority
while
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30-year period
accounted
for the smallest Wrong verb form
accounting
percentage
among all the other outlays.
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detials
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details
three times
span,the spending on salaries led a Use the right word
three-year
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part in annual outlays almost Correct your spelling
higher
above
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apply
in
school Change preposition
of
payment
, Fix the agreement mistake
payments
driveded
by Correct your spelling
driven
teacher’s
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teachers’
wage
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wages
flactuating
around 40% to 50%, and other Correct your spelling
fluctuating
worker’s
remuneration. Check wording
workers’
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contrast
other Add a comma
contrast,
worker’s
remuneration has kept Check wording
workers’
decline
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declining
in
the same time, dropping from 28% in 1981 to 15% in 2001.
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at
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, the Linking Words
percentage
of insurance has Use synonyms
expierence
a consistent growth from 1981 to 2001,Correct your spelling
experienced
with
from 2%up to 8%.
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apply
schol
expenditures Correct your spelling
school
consititued
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consisted
with
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of
Rescources
(Correct your spelling
Resources
such
as Linking Words
book
) and Fix the agreement mistake
books
futniture
and equipmentCorrect your spelling
furniture
.
which had undergone both Punctuation problem
,
increase
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increases
decrease
. To be clear, Fix the agreement mistake
decreases
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figure Fix capitalization
the
fotr rescources
slightly rose Correct your spelling
for resources
excatly
5 Correct your spelling
exactly
percentage
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point
(15% in 1981 to 20%in 1991),Fix the agreement mistake
points
howerve
,it sharply Correct your spelling
however
dippeed
in 2001, falling Correct your spelling
dipped
down
almost half of rateChange preposition
to
,
(20% in 1991 down to 9% in 2001). Punctuation problem
apply
the
proportion of Fix capitalization
The
futniture
and equipment Correct your spelling
furniture
decline
first at a smooth rate of Wrong verb form
declined
acound
one-three from 1981 to, resumed growth to 23%in 2001Correct your spelling
around