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The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.

The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.
The bar chart
illustrate
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 data about
sales
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 of
games
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software
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,
CDs
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 and
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DVD
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DVDs
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 or
video
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videos
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in
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apply
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worldwide from 2000 until 2003. In summary,
games
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software
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 and
DVD
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/video show
increase
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an increase
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 in
sales
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 in
given
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a given
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periode
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period
 of time,
while
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CDs
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has
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have
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 a fall downward. But,
CDs
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has
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have
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 the highest
sales
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 in all given
period
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periods
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. The most significant
sales
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 contributed by
CDs
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. In 2000,
CDs
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 generated $35
billion
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of
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in
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sales
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. But, It showed a gradual downturn to approximately $33
billion
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 in 2003 and
remain
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remains
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 in the highest place.
Covnersely
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Conversely
,
games
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software
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 and
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DVD
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DVDs
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 showed
upward
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an upward
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 trend from 2000 to 2003.
Initially
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, these
transaction
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transactions
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 were around $12
billion
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 and $18
billion
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 on
Games
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dan
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and
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DVD
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DVDs
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, respectively. Game
software
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 showed a gradual rise to about $15
billion
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 (2001), $18
billion
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 (2002) and $19
billion
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 (2003), with
in
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apply
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the least
sales
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 of all
product
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products
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.
Futhermore
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Furthermore
,
DVD
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/video appeared a significant increase to just above $30
billion
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 in 2003.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, games, software, cds, dvd, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trends
  • global sales
  • media types
  • software
  • significant increase
  • decline
  • popularity
  • consumer preferences
  • technological advancements
  • peak sales
  • growth rates
  • fluctuations
  • digital technology
  • traditional media
  • digital downloads
  • streaming services
  • consumer habits
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