The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants

The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants
The bar chart illustrates how many
people
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in the adult education centre came to some evening courses in 2009,
while
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the pie chart shows the percentage of participants grouped by
age
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.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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more
people
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were interested in language courses, and most of them were older
age
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group
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. Around 10 men and 20 women attended the drama. It was lower than the painting
class
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, where more than 20 men and exactly 30 women went to the
class
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. The sculpture
class
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had the lowest attendance. In total, no more than 20 were on the night course. Precisely 20 males and 40 females were in the
class
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, making it the highest number of
people
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in the
class
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. Divided into 5
age
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categories, only 5 per cent were
people
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below 20, followed by the 20 to 29
group
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, with a percentage of exactly 11. 16 per cent of
people
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were between 30 and 39,
while
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more than 20 per cent were in the higher
age
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group
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. The oldest
age
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group
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had the biggest percentage of with more than 40.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, age, group, class with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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