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The maps show Pacific Railway Station station in 1998 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show Pacific Railway Station station in 1998 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate the
tranformations
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transformations
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 of Pacific Railway
Station
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 between 1998 and the present time.
Overall
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, the
station
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 became modernized, the toilets were replaced by the new railways that service deliver goods and citizens and developing residential areas From 1998 to the present time, the toilets were destroyed and three railways were added for residents in the top left of the
station
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.
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, in the centre of the map, two new shops and a restaurant for residents were established. There is a construction of the supermarket in the southwest corner of the map. Moving onto the top right of the
station
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, four railways stay unchanged.
Besides
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, there
is
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apply
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a shop was built between the cafe and
ticket
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the ticket
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 office that still
exist
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exists
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 in the present time

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words station with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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