The map below shows the plan of a proposed new town. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows the plan of a proposed new town. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map illustrates the layout of a town expected to be formed in the future.

Overall

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it is clear that

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significant developments include

formation

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the formation

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of residential areas, industries, roads and amenities

such

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as public transportation, parking and recreational locations. The proposed plan demonstrates the creation of a ring

road

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that will be connected to all the motorways and facilities in every

direction

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Additonally

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Additionally

, the target aims at

establishment

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the establishment

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of two commercial locations, one in the south-east and the other in the north-west

direction

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, the outer part of the ring

road

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will be used for the construction of houses in each

direction

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with one recreational asset close to the apartments built in

southwest

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a southwest

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direction

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Moreover

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, the inner part of the ring

road

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is expected to be distributed for

formation

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the formation

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of households, parking and bus facilities. The northeast location surrounded by ring

road

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will consist of two residential buildings and an area for activities.

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, in the

southeast

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southeast,

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there will be one house followed by recreational locations in the southwest part with some homes.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, direction with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

174 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

residential housing
ring road
local roads
commercial zones
inhabitants
transportation system
bus terminals
train stations
recreational areas
sports facilities
educational institutions
schools
libraries
accessibility
industrial zones
outskirts
noise and pollution

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